The noble bandit

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The noble bandit

A new dawn had come,the court of the DMC had to choose a new leader.

The journey begins.

Days had past from the first encounter at the cryo lab,and he was still struggling to survive,as it was his strong suit to hunt,trap,wait for prey,and also with a good education in mechanics,he had a good chance of survival.
But fighting other humans was new,they where tough and strong,he was weak.
it was fate that kept him going,or maybe just stupidly great luck.

He had traveled for days without rest,only soda kept him going,he saw the strange glow and was very interested,maybe not the only one.

when he got to the glow,he saw a city protected by a great wall,when he got closer a man walked over,and as fate would have it he would never get in as this hatter man had given him a chance but he declined thinking it was a trap.

he traveled onward,back to the cryo lab,he found a gun and some shells,the tides have turned,know he is the hunter and the others are the prey.

days later he had a run in with a bandit who had a scar on his arm,he had a run in with him a few days after he left the cryo lab,the bandit also recognized him,he pulled out a revolver,it was to late,the shotguns trigger was pulled,taking the bandits head off.

It was a custom of his to put his victims bodies in a neat grave as he was human to,he had feelings for all.

When he finally got into the DMC,and the people heard the stories of his travels he was elected leader.
By his command,soldiers of the DMC would take over parts of the wasteland,the world would change in a way the seemed imposable,the wasteland became friendly,and the human race was saved,just like many other species around the planet.

When he died the world plummeted into chaos and was reverted back into a wasteland only to again,and for the last time in human history be at peace,and it would be for many thousands of years to come.

asthepanda2

Too simple. You shoot an asshole and become leader. I've killed hundreds of bandits and I don't even get a discount at the red gnome.

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Proud member of the International Federation of Looters, Bandits, and Raiders. "Divided, we stand. Together, you better have athletic skill!"

With Crowbar, will travel
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I shoot more than 1 Pearson,I was just to lazy to make the long list,I still don't know if I should put in the mutilated dog man.
(If i added the list people would be reading for hours,my character survived for a couple of years.)

asthepanda2

Why not tell it in segments like chapters? Instead of one large text filled screen, release parts of the story periodically.

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Proud member of the International Federation of Looters, Bandits, and Raiders. "Divided, we stand. Together, you better have athletic skill!"

With Crowbar, will travel
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